I had a manual typewriter that my cousin's girlfriend let me use when I was a senior in high school. It wasn't top of the line, but it worked marvels. I am still thankful.
Good story. It feels a little like my story about my car dying. The last line doesn't work for me. For me it could be eliminated and the story would be better
I had a manual typewriter that my cousin's girlfriend let me use when I was a senior in high school. It wasn't top of the line, but it worked marvels. I am still thankful.
Good story. It feels a little like my story about my car dying. The last line doesn't work for me. For me it could be eliminated and the story would be better
I see your point. You are right, the penultimate graph is a better place to end. I think I'll edit it when I get a chance. Thanks.